Yes, there is a way to construct a better response. Last year, I discussed the constructed response in
my December 24th post. One year later, I have some new insights.
Is one paragraph better than the other? Let's analyze them.
The first paragraph focuses on the reader's impression of the Camel. It includes a reference to the story, great support, and a strong organizational structure. The second paragraph is shorter and uses a slightly weaker organizational pattern. But it's better. Why?
In the second paragraph, the reader addresses the attribute that affects the outcome of the story. In addition, she explains how the character's actions affected that outcome.
Today, my students are contemplating elements of each story like never before. They're writing concise responses to express key details. It's powerful stuff. Thank you, Common Core.
Enjoy teaching today! I know I will.
Brenda